October 30th, 2010
Book of the Day: Witch Fury

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Sarafina Connell is having the worst week of her life. It takes an even darker turn when an infamous playboy kidnaps her and reveals a world she never knew existed….

It’s a world where magick is real, and where Sarafina is given a chance to join a secret cabal that is bent on gaining absolute power. They could use a woman like her—a witch with an untapped gift for creating fire. But she isn’t about to get in league with the devil.

Rescued from her captors, Sarafina is introduced to a coven that is duty-bound to fight the forces of darkness. She’s pleased that her savior is the imposingly seductive Theo—until the trust between them goes up in flames. However, as the war between good and evil is waged, Sarafina and Theo realize they have no choice but to unite in the battle for supremacy—that’s getting hotter by the minute.

Sarafina might’ve been named for the angels, but she’d always known one day she’d end up in hell. Her mother had told that a hundred times while she’d been growing up. She just never figured it would be while she was still breathing. But here she was—broke, dumped, and grief-stricken. It couldn’t get any worse.

Her fingers white and shaking, she released the yellow rose she held and let it fall onto Rosemary’s casket. It came to a rest on the polished poplar top, followed by many more released by those around her. Yellow roses had been Rosemary’s favorite. They match your hair, buttercup. That’s what Rosemary had always said, holding one of the flowers up to Sarafina’s nose.

Sarafina had scraped together every last cent for that shiny coffin. She hadn’t been able to afford it. The funeral had almost beggared her. However, her foster mother had deserved the best. And since Rosemary had never had what she deserved in life, Sarafina had made sure she’d had it in death. The only problem was that now Sarafina had ninety five dollars left in her bank account and rent had been due last week. She’d make it through, though, she always did.

She couldn’t cry. It was like all the tears were caught up inside her, stoppered tight. It would be good if she could. It would relieve this awful pressure in her chest.

“Bye, Rosemary,” she whispered.

Reverend Evans droned on, but Sarafina hardly heard him. She barely noticed the others around her, either, all of Rosemary’s friends who’d come to say their farewells. They clasped her hands after the funeral was over, squeezed her shoulder and offered condolences. Her foster mother had had lots of friends.
If Sarafina had still lived here in Bowling Green, she knew she’d have half a million sympathy casseroles on her doorstep by now. As it was, she was headed back to Chicago right after the funeral. Back home.
She couldn’t wait.

Still in a daze, she turned away from the grave and came face to face with Nick. His dark brown eyes regarded her solemnly from the handsome face she’d known for years. “You’re not fit to drive seven hours today, Sarafina. Stay the night and head out in the morning. You can crash at my place.”

A smile flickered over her mouth. “Oh, really? Amanda said that would be all right?”

She and Nick had been sweethearts during high school. Although that fire had long since flickered out and faded to friendship, Sarafina had lost her virginity to Nick. Sarafina strongly suspected Amanda didn’t want her on their couch.

Robin, another friend from childhood, came to stand near Nick. “If you don’t want to stay with him, you can stay with me.” She tilted her blond head to the side in a gesture Sarafina knew meant she was concerned.

Sarafina couldn’t swing a cat in Bowling Green and not hit someone from her past. As soon as she’d arrived, she’d been beset by old friends—and other people. Those other people were why she wanted to leave so badly. Like, now.

Whispers.

In Bowling Green there were whispers wherever she went. Hey, that’s the girl who…. Isn’t that the daughter of the woman who… She was a walking freak show. Even fifteen years after it had happened, people still recognized her. High school had been hell.

She leaned forward and hugged Nick, then Robin. “You-all are sweet to offer, but I have to go into the office tomorrow. I can’t miss any more work than I have already.” She had a funeral to pay off.

Nick shifted and frowned. “They don’t give you grief leave?”

Damn it. Caught right in the middle of her subterfuge.

“Yes, a few days.” She pressed her lips together. “It’s just that—I don’t want to—“

Understanding came over his face. “Oh.”

Sarafina relaxed. “Yeah.”

“It’s too bad, but I get it, Sarafina,” Robin said, her brown eyes sad.

“I’m glad you both understand. The other reason why I don’t want to stay is because I don’t want to wallow, you know? I need to stay busy, get my mind on something else. If don’t do that, it’ll be worse. The grief, I mean.”

If she lost her momentum now and allowed herself to be mired in the loss of the only true mother she’d ever known, Sarafina knew she’d just dissolve.

“This fall I’ll come to visit.” The words popped out before Sarafina realized it. She’d wanted to appease Robin, but they both knew that had been a lie. Sarafina only came back here when she absolutely had to.

“Will you, really?” asked Robin suspiciously.

“I-I promise to think about it.”

Robin patted her back. “Will you at least call when you get home? I’m going to worry about you all day.”

Sarafina nodded. “I will.” She paused, swallowing hard. God, she wished she could cry.

It wasn’t that she wanted to leave her friends. Sarafina loved them, as she’d loved Rosemary, but the town itself held too many bad memories. Once she’d turned eighteen she’d saved up her money, bought a car and had driven away. Spending time here now, just breathing the air, it made her feel suffocated.

“Why didn’t Alex come with you, anyway?” Nick asked.

Sarafina looked down at her toes. Ugh. “Alex and I broke up.”

“What? When?” Robin exclaimed.

“About a week before Rosemary died. It just wasn’t working out.” Alex had dumped her, actually.

“I’m so sorry, sweetie,” said Robin, cupping her shoulder.

Sarafina probably should’ve broken up with Alex first, a long time ago. Selfishly, she hadn’t wanted to be alone. She’d been afraid to be alone, to be perfectly honest. Because of that fear she’d stayed with him long after the fire had gone out, up until Alex had decided to give the relationship the axe. He’d done them both a favor. It’d been like pulling a dying plant out by its roots. It was a relief not to have to watch the leaves wilt anymore.

“Honestly, I don’t miss him much. I do miss you guys though,” she finished, her voice breaking.

Robin hugged her again, making Sarafina let out a small sob. “Well, then, come back,” Robin whispered.

Sarafina shook her head and held onto her friend for another long moment. “I can’t.”

Robin drew back and smiled sadly. “I know.”

Sarafina turned and walked away, toward her rusty Honda Accord. “I’ll call you when I get home,” she called over her shoulder. That was, if her phone service hadn’t been shut off.

Robin and Nick stood at Rosemary’s grave, waving.

She might be penniless and on the verge of bankruptcy, she might have no family left, and she might be newly dumped, but at least she had good friends. There was always a spot of light in the dark if you looked for it.

The Accord started with a little hitch that made her heart pound.

“God, please, no,” she whispered. The last place on Earth she wanted to get stranded was Bowling Green, Kentucky. “If you’re going to have trouble, do it far from here, okay?” she crooned at the vehicle. “Or better yet, don’t do it all. My bank account can’t take it.”

Holding her breath, she guided the car away from the curb and out of the cemetery. She’d take the long way back to the highway, avoiding the subdivision where she’d grown up. It was a pretty drive from here to Louisville, full of hills, gorgeous exposed rock walls and green trees. Kentucky was a beautiful state, but Sarafina couldn’t wait to get back to Chicago—where the scent of car exhaust filled her nose and the honking and voices of humanity constantly filled her ears. Where no one knew her on sight. No one knew her bizarre family history.

Where there were no whispers.

As she drove, a swell of memory assaulted her. Images her brain were able to suppress in Chicago reared their nasty heads here, so near her childhood home. In her mind a memory of her mother flickered. The middle-aged redhead stood on the lawn of their home brandishing a grilling fork, insane words pouring from her lips. Flames licked and the scent of burning…

Sarafina lunged for the radio and found a good station that played loud, hard rock music. She opened the window of her car and threw herself into the song, singing the lyrics out loud. She wouldn’t allow her mind to go back there, she just couldn’t.

Instead, she thought of Grosset, her Pomeranian. She’d left him with her neighbor for the trip south and couldn’t wait to see him again. Sarafina smiled. See? Life wasn’t so bad. She had friends, a job, and, most importantly, she had the love of a good dog.

Then there was that guy who kept asking her for a date. His name was Brian. No… Bradley. Cute, too. He was a UPS guy, came into the office every afternoon and sought her out specifically to sign for the deliveries. What was it about UPS guys? He flirted with her every day, cajoling her to go to dinner with him. It was flattering. She’d been turning him down because of Alex, but now she was free. Maybe the next time he asked, she’d say yes.

She rolled into the northern Chicago suburb in the early evening and parked in front of the beautiful eighteenth century home where her apartment was located. It was only a few blocks from her office downtown, though she always took the EL in to avoid parking problems.

Stopping the car at the curb, she turned off the engine and stared up at the beautiful, huge windows. Sarafina loved this place. The neighborhood was quiet and older, the street lined with stately old trees. Hopefully her landlord would give her an extension on the rent. Most likely he would. After all, this would be the first time she’d ever been late.

She knocked on her downstairs neighbor’s door and Alexis, a college girl, answered. “Grosset? Oh, he’s already at your place. Your boyfriend came and picked him up? He’s cute!” she squealed, then said, “Your boyfriend, I mean. Grosset’s cute too, though. Ta!” and closed the door in Sarafina’s face.

Boyfriend? God, she hoped Alex wasn’t having second thoughts. She stared at the closed door for a moment, anxiety making her stomach muscles tighten. Then she stalked up the stairs to her apartment, her mind whirling about she would say to him. Now that he was gone, she wanted him to stay that way.

Her apartment door squeaked open and she started down the hallway, hearing someone cough in the living room. “Alex, listen—“

She stopped short and her keys clattered to the floor. Shock held her immobile as she stared at Stefan Faucheux standing in her living room…holding her dog. Her mind stuttered.

Stefan Faucheux?

Everyone knew who he was. The rich playboy and CEO of Duskoff International, had been the media’s darling for a long time. He was everything they loved—handsome, interesting, intelligent and monied. Then one day he’d disappeared. For a year the world had wondered where he’d gone. Foul play had been suspected and investigations undergone. All the entertainment shows had been atwitter with the mystery.

Then suddenly six months ago he’d simply popped back into existence, taking up where he’d left off as if he’d never been gone. He’d been traveling, he’d explained. Mostly he has been in Costa Rica surfing. No one had been able to find him because he hadn’t wanted to be found. If you had enough money, Sarafina guessed you could do that, just disappear without a trace. Personally, she wouldn’t know.

Most people thought it had simply been a publicity stunt. Maybe they were right. Stefan seemed to like attention.

Right now he really wanted hers.

The bigger question was why? Why was he standing in her living room?

“Wha—” she started and then snapped her mouth closed as Bradley stepped out from her small hallway and stood next to Stefan.

What the hell was the UPS guy and Stefan Faucheux doing in her apartment?

Stefan inclined his head. “Sarafina Connell, it’s a pleasure. I think you’ve already met my associate.” He took a step toward her while Grosset panted and smiled a happy doggie smile at her. “We tried this easy way, but you were more resistant than most to Bradley’s charms. Women normally just swoon right at his feet, boyfriend or not, making our job so much easier.”

“What’s going on? What are you—”

“Since Bradley couldn’t get you alone, I’m afraid we’ll have to do it the less pleasant way. Trust me, we’re doing you a favor.” He clucked. “Data entry, Sarafina? You’re wasting yourself. We’ll make the most of your skills where we’re taking you. I just wish your initiation could have been nicer.”

That was a threat. Stefan Faucheux had just threatened her in her own living room, and he was holding her dog!

Sarafina opened her mouth to scream and someone grabbed her from behind, a big meaty hand clamping down hard over her lips. A needle bit deep into her hip and a thick drowsiness almost immediately closed over her. Her knees buckled and someone lifted her. Her head lolled to the side, unconsciousness closing over her in a slow wave.

Stefan tilted his head to the side and petted Grosset’s silky head, while the Pomeranian panted happily. “Now we have you and your little dog too.”

Stefan Faucheux was one of my favorite bad guys. Suave, sophisticated, handsome as all get out, he was like writing the devil, if the devil was a wealthy playboy. Right now, in my Dark Magick series, I’m writing Gideon P. Amberdoyal, who is definitely one of my favorites too. Gideon is deliciously creepy and twisted character who believes every nasty things he does is for the greater good. I like my bad guys to be layered, to have nuance to their personalities. I want to know their motivations, their family history, and to make them human enough for the reader to relate to them. I LOVE my bad guys.


How about you? What qualities do you like best in the bad guys you read?

THIS CONTEST IS NOW CLOSED.

43 comments to “Book of the Day: Witch Fury”

  1. I like my bad boys to be willing to do anything to win, keep and protect that woman who has stolen his heart. I like the little bit of darkness against the goodness they show towards their woman.


  2. I like a bit of mystery with my bad boys. This mystery causes him to act the way he does.


  3. I definitly want to get into the bad guys head…to see what motivates them, why they are like they are.

    I think the antagonist is just as important as the protagonist and I like to know about them too.

    Valerie
    in Germany


  4. I like my bad boys to be flirtatious with evil sense of humor. And they need to be down right sexy.


  5. I like the bad guys to be sexy, confident, and devious.


  6. I like my bad boys to ultimately have a good heart. I want to believe if they thought their words or actions were truly hurting someone that they’d care enough to cut it out.


  7. I like bad boys who have redeeming qualities. They are sexy, dark, and just a little of the wild side. I want my bad boys to fall hard when they meet the one and become even scarier when someone threatens the people they love.


  8. I love when we get the back story of the bad guy. It helps to understand them when we know what made them so bad. I even like it when I feel a little sorry for my bad guys and sometimes we learn that the bad guy isn’t really so bad when we know what drives him.


  9. I like the bad guys to do some good things and have people who truly care about them. There is no black and white so I like the bad guys to be in the gray area.


  10. The stronger the antagonist, the more the protagonist gets to shine as they overcome them. But you’re right, they should have understandable motivations so there are layers to them, rather than just a cardboard “bad guy”.


  11. I like my bad boys to e mysterious, to have layers to their character that are gradually revealed!


  12. I like my bad boys to have a twisted sense of humor.


  13. I think there definitely needs to be some reasoning behind the bad boy. Whether you agree with the route they take or not, there need to be some understanding of why they are the way they are. It helps to define their character.


  14. I like my bad boys to be sexy, I also love it when they secretly have a soft side but not too soft!


  15. Flirty, sexy, and tattooed…. My kind of bad boy


  16. I like my bad boys to be sexy, alpha, but also have a soft side for the heroine. I like it when my bad boy has reasoning behind why he is one.


  17. I really like the same qualities that you do! Gideon is really creepy, in fact his whole sect is. I think hwat put me over the edge with him is when I found out what he does for his religion (or at least what he says he does in the name of his religion) to himself and to others. He is cruel, and yet he doesnt even care . . . CREEPY! Makes him fun and ineteresting to read about though, that is for sure!


  18. I like bad boys to have depth… many layers to dig through…be dark and dangerous with secrets…


  19. I like the misunderstood hero as my bad guy. Like, he’ll kidnap and keep a woman under his watchful eye and everyone thinks he’s a slave master or something, but it was to actually save the woman from dying or some such nonsense. The misunderstood hero. I like those.


  20. Usually, I dont like bad boys since they tend to be down right evil and twisted. However, if they have redeming characteristics with understandable reason/s for their choices, you cant help but feel for them. It also helps if they are attractive, charming, mysterious, confident, cunning and aggressive.


  21. I like my bad boy to be aloof outside but actually very kind and sensitive inside.


  22. I think it’s interesting to read about bad guys who might be trying to right a wrong done to them in the past.


  23. Well…a bad boy must most certainly be sexy as hell and confidant. But my favorites are the bad boys that aren’t really bad, just hurt or misunderstood. Might be why, Vampire Diaries junkie that I am, that while Stefen wins my vote any day, I have a great deal of sympathy for Damon.


  24. Have you seen the ads for the new movie Megamind? The bad guy is so cliched that it is funny. Ok, I hate cliche bad guys! I want a bad guy who is really bad but often it is for perfectly understandable reasons. That doesn’t mean he is ever going to be good but that I get why he does such bad things. And, he must never be cliched unless it is done on purpose to propel the story forward.


  25. The bad guy should have a motivation that makes sense to him. Also should have his own set of ethics.


  26. I like the bad guys who are strong and arrogant. But when it comes to their loved ones, they fight for them.
    I also like it, when you can actually see how much he loves his woman. He may even be jealous at times ;-)


  27. I like bad guys who are a bit twisted and very evil because I want to hate them, unless the author has plans to make them the hero in another book.


  28. I like bad guys (if they’re not going to be redemmed) to be unapologetically nasty :cool:


  29. I like a bad guy to be wicked cultured and for him to be doing all the wrong things for what he thinks are good reasons. I don’t want to see him going on and on about how evil he is, cause a bad guy like that is just hard to take seriously.


  30. I enjoy reading bad boy books. They are usually sexy, defiant, stubborn, but I like for them to show some decent signs of themselves. I like for them to have a sensitive side (not to sensitive), caring at times, and take care of their women.


  31. I like them to have an edge to them, a bit of the unknown, and a subtle sense of humor


  32. I like my bad guys to be real, to have some redeemable quality. Nobody is completely evil, just like nobody is perfect. And it just makes them that much creepier… And then it’s always fun at some future date if the author decides to bring them to the good side… or not. *thinking of Kenyon’s One Silent Night* :grin:


  33. he has to be so bad and sexy, but then he has to be smart enough to realize that bad people can be Good people too at the End :)


  34. I like my bad boy with the alpha quality. He can basically gets away with anything. He’s on the side of wrong trying to make things right. He may be all wrong for me but he can make me feel safe and protected. That is my bad boy.


  35. I love the bad guys! I want to know what happened to them and why they turned “bad.”


  36. I like the bad guy to have some kind of motivation for what he does, not just that he was born evil or something. It adds more depth to the story, even if I still don’t think that what he does is right.


  37. I want my bad guys to be totally unpredictable, and keep me and my herione on our toes.


  38. Well, I like hating the bad guys, so I am no fun. The bad guy that gets to me the most though are the ones that don’t think they are bad guys, that think the ends really justify ANY means, that think just a little wrong won’t matter in the ling run…those are the scary people.
    Vicky


  39. So I’m a little past Oct. 30, but I still wanted to post. :) I like to know my bad guys. I want to know why they’re doing what they’re doing – what’s their motivation? What made them the way they are? The more real they are, the creepier they are. I like the ones with redeeming qualities as well as the completely evil scary guys. It all depends on the book. :)


  40. Bad guys have to be smart, clever, sexy, mysterious and witty. I like guys with sharp senses of humor, too. They have to have layers to their character, but they can also be completely twisted and evil, depending on the story. I love getting the backstory on them, finding out why they are the way they are.


  41. bad boys should be strong, sexy and unpredictable…


  42. I like getting a glimpse of what makes them the “bad boy,” but I love it when we see a moment that redeems them and shows us the good guy inside.


  43. very great book, wish the series didnt have to end :-(
    this book made me laugh, smile, and cry..
    it was amazing